Tuesday, April 28, 2009

When You Weren't Looking

...Blackmouse fell down today at one of the school's stairs..not too sure what went wrong tho..but it seems dat a certain switch's been turned on..Blackmouse suddenly felt like writing...hmmm...
Here it goes.....

When you weren't looking,
I checked my hair if it's in place.
When you weren't looking,
I stared at your hair wanting to put it in place.

When you weren't looking,
I smiled at you in daze.
When you weren't looking,
I watched you smiling and suddenly feel safe.

When you weren't looking,
I said a little prayer.
When you weren't looking,
I shifted to be nearer.

When you weren't looking,
I secretly wished we can be happy together.
When you weren't looking,
I hoped I'll no longer live in tear.

When you looked
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
I ran away.....................and cried!

2 comments:

@Fr!^n@ said...

cedeyhnye ur writing nih julie..
auchh.. so touching okeh..
meh sini... hugsss skit..
hmmm btw.. u become more creative when something happen to ya..
keep up... like to read.. but then sedeyh sangat ni haa..
nice poem or writing.. ;)

tamo nanes2.. b strong k..
its part of our journey to success..
amin.. :>

Black Mouse said...

erk...erm..
tangisan dlm ketawa..hahah!
hugsss balik!! bile lg mau hug2 ni dodol?..sile lah turun kl lagik..wuwuuu..thanx babeyh..aku igt ko nk kate jiwang..sdp ckit bunyi "creative" tu..hahah!ko dtg cni mane aku nanes kn?..ko da blik bru aku nanes..tol x?..kesimpulanny?? :P

...amin...~